My favorite place is My Home's garden and my room.
My Home has beautiful garden.
Sometimes, I saw many sparrow in my garden. It comes here to eat foods.
One day, When I saw my garden, wild sparrows come in my room!
I was very surprised and it tried to go out my room.
But, it can't go out my room, so I released it.It looks very happy.
My home is where I feel calm.
Especially, my room is very important place for me.
Because, I need a place which I can rest.
My garden has a lot of plants. For example, tree, flower, etc.
I have a lot of memories in my garden.
When I was child, I rest under the tree. This tree is not so big, but, I can rest there because, I was little.
I helped my grandfather's housework when I was 10 years old.
He raised many plants in my garden, So, I also raise a lot of flowers with my grandfather.
It was very interesting and become a cause of loving flowers.
The best of memory in my garden was raised watermelon.
When I was 10 years old, I raised watermelon with my grandfather in summer.
It was very interesting and it become important memory. I played with many friends in my garden when I was child. It is also my memory.
The memory in my room is playing with a lot of my friends. When I was 12 years old, I invited many friends in my room. This day, I played game with them, it was very interesting. I broken my foot's finger when I was 10 years old. The place I injured it was my room. this is also my important memories.
Now, my room is only place where I can rest now.
When I was tired, I come in my room and play games.
It is some of my enjoyment. I usually do it, So, I can be calm every time. If I don't have the place where I can rest, I would become temperamental person.
I like these places still now. I 'll love there in the future.
Thank you for reading.
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Your house garden is very great because there are a lot of plants and flowers. I want to come your garden and to eat food.
返信削除You have a lot of memory in your room!! I like my room very much too.
返信削除I want you tell me about your favorite thing in your room.
I think that your house garden so beautiful!! I'd like to see your garden. It is surprised that watermelon grew in your garden. What kinds of flower blooming now?
返信削除Wild sparrow came in your room!? It is wonderful!
返信削除And your house's garden is beautiful. I want to see it.
I suggest that you separate paragraph, and it easy to see.